The high res of your first shot, is there still definition in her face? It is a great lifestyle landscape shot. I really like the way you captured everything. The sky, the model, city and ocean all balance really well.
Good job on the second shot as well. Its got that urban country girl look. Keep up the shots man keep trying new stuff your doing great.
And the third is a good portrait, little to washed out for my preference, watch that your subject does not drop her shoulders next time. Other then that they are all great shots.
she works for an agency so the pics are not supposed to see the light of day...so shhhhh!
Tony- rolled shoulders like that are more of a manly pose. girls are supposed to have good posture and get their chest out (if you're going for a model shot)